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April 19


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Chapter 1: I Set Fire To The Rain(part 1)

Unknown POV:

       The rain heavily hits the ground in front of me scattering mud all around and making my way out of the forest even harder.I really do not know where I'm going and the forest seems to stretch constantly...The trees seem to stretch their branches, as if trying to catch me...I don't know how I can continue ... I don't know if I can continue...I'm falling unconscious... I think I'll pass out soon.

       My clothes are soaking wet and stained with ... blood? Is that blood?I can't tell right now.And my hair is dirty and full of blood...And I am pretty sure so is my face.I have some scratches deep on my hands and there's a piece of barbed wire hanging from my pants.Where did I got this?Did I jumped over a fence?Why?it hurts so bad...It's too cold...I-...I think I'm going to fall, my knees gave up keeping me on my feet and I think my ankles are feeling numb...I'm going to die frozen,aren't I?

       I hit the ground with a loud 'Thud' that echoed through the nearby forest.I-I think I hear sirens driving away from me.Good. Now nobody will find me here...I think the rain has slowed down a bit but I can still feel it hitting me pretty hard.I tried to get up but my limbs feel very heavy.'This is my grave.'

       I felt something warm dripping on my cheek and tears started to stream from my eyes.My breathing began to slow down slightly as I felt a warm feeling began to fill my whole body.So this is what death feels like.I closed my eyes trying to enjoy my last few heartbeats.It was pretty quiet around, I could hear the rain hitting the ground and the trees leaves, the wind blowing coldly and some ...rustling?Whatever makes that sound is dangerously close, and is approaching me very fast...

       I passed out.

Slenderman's POV:

       I approached carefully the helpless creature that was trembling on the cold ground.In front of me was lying down a male human that looked pretty young in my opinion.He looked quite pale and cold,his eyes are covered with his (H/C) bangs but I can still tell if his eyes are closed or not.

       I crept a little closer as the human started whimpering and murmuring something impossible to understand.I gasped silently while I grabbed him by the shoulder and turned him slightly.All his clothes were dirty and bloodstained but what shocked me the most was that fact that the blood wasn't his at all.

       In my attempt to lift him up he clung desperately to my jacket trying to warm himself up.Warping slowly my tendrils around his waist I picked the poor boy up and began slowly to walk to the mansion.I think I am a little attached to this human.

      'An extra helping hand would never be bad, would it ?'

I've noticed how popular these "x Male!Reader' got, and I decided to give it a try by myself!
Warning lame Fic is lame, sorry.
All I have to say is that this is not my best and is awfully short for my liking.
So...What do you think? Should I write more ?

:iconbiggrinfaceplz: I.Regret.NOTHING.
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MissProxy Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Student
I'm just imagining I'm a badass female xD
SUSHIFREAK101 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2014  New member Student
Ikr XD
CelesteBlood Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Go on ^.^
animefan402 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014
loved the first chapter
CelesteBlood Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
He loves you too ( the chapter, not me!) ! Not like I like you or anything...Baka!
maskylover9900 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014
I like to imagine the male readers as female readers so its like its happening to me.
CelesteBlood Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ravala Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Student Artist
It may be weird but I just pretend I'm a guy. I guess its a writer thing or just a me thing because I have a few male oc's and I have to sorta think-like-a-guy so I can write better. Its one of the reasons I have no qualms about stuff like LGBT. (Especially since those books are yaois~ ^u^ Chu~)
AliceIsAwesome1 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hi! I clicked on this story because I recently got into the creepypasta fandom, and I have to say this is a great start! I see that there is more parts and I am going to read them.

But first, I'd like to give a pointer. I see a lot of grammar mistakes and sentences that could have been written so it could make more sense and basically flow better. I find that it helps to have a proof reader and to read it out loud to yourself.
Take this sentence as an example: "I approached carefully the helpless creature that was trembling on the cold ground."
To me it seems that it would sound better if written similar to, "I carefully approached the helpless creature that was trembling on the cold ground."

I am no trying to come off rude or mean, so I am sorry if I did. I'm just trying to give some tips to fellow writers.
As stated before, I really liked this start. So sorry for this little rant. >.<
Ravala Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Student Artist
Yeah, I've gotten so used to reading fanfics that I just edit it in my head and continue (^u^") Heh~
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